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The travel to a new home w/adventure

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In a car, a family was moving to their new home, in the car was Max and Angela Petrova with their daughter Britt in the backseat looking at a bouquet of flowers with a note in it.

I’m going to miss you Britt, your best friend Nina

Britt wasn’t happy about the move as she looked at the bouquet but she heard her father’s voice talking to her.

“Britt, Britt we’re almost there.” Max said
“This really is in the middle of nowhere, I’m going to have to go to the next town to shop.”  Angela said
“We’ll just have to learn to like it.” Max said

Britt was staring at the ceiling of her parents’ car when she looked toward the driver seat hearing her dad talking again.

“Look Britt, there’s your new school. Looks great, doesn’t it?” Max asked her
“It doesn’t look so bad.” Angela answered

Britt adjusted as she looked over at the school as they were passing it. She wasn’t happy about the move and she didn’t want to be away from all her friends.

“It’s gonna stink, I liked my old school.” Britt said as she adjusted but then looked at her flowers. She freaked out a bit and showed her mom “Mom, my flowers are dying.” Britt said

“I told you not to smother them like that, we’ll put them in water when we get to our new home.” Angela said as she looked out the window.
Britt sighed “I finally get a bouquet and it’s a good-bye present.” Britt said as she got back in the back.
“Your father bought you a rose for your birthday, don’t you remember?” Angela asked
Britt folded her arms “Yeah, one. Just one rose isn’t a bouquet.”

Angela handed the card that came with the flowers giving it to Britt. “Hold on to your card, I’m opening the window and quit whining it’s fun to move to a new place it’s an adventure.” Angela said

The drive seemed long as Britt watched out the window, she didn’t know what to expect when it came to this adventure her mom spoke of. Soon though her dad took a turn on a road then stopped.

“wait, did I take the wrong turn?” Max asked, “this can’t be right.”
Angela was looking around then looked up “Look there’s our house...” Angela said as the three of them looked out the window.
“Huh?” Max said
“it’s that blue one at the end.” Angela said
Max blinked “Oh, you’re right. I must have missed the turn off. This road should get us there.”
Britt was looking out the window at the little houses as she listened to her mom. “Honey, don’t take a short cut you always get us lost.” Angela said
“trust me, it’s going to work.” Max assured her

Max put the car in drive as he drove forward “what are those little stones? They look like houses.” Britt asked
“They’re shrines. Some people think little spirits live there.” Angela answered

Max drove into the forest way as they were making their way to their house. Britt wasn’t so sure they’d gone the right way and looked at the front.

“Dad, I think we’re lost.” Britt said
“We’re fine. I got 4-wheel drive.” Max said as he kept driving but it was a bit bumpy.
“Sit down please sweetie.” Angela said

The drive was a bit bumpy and it was also a bit dangerous. Britt did her best to stay sitting down but with how shaky the car was getting and everything around her moving it was becoming quite hard to just sit.

“Honey, slow down you’re gonna kill us.” Angela said

The car suddenly come to an abrupt halt as they looked at an old building.

“What this old building?” Angela asked
“It looks like an entrance.” Max said as he got out of the car and walked over to it.
“Honey, get back in the car or we’ll be late.” Angela said but then heard the back-seat door open as Britt got out and put her flowers away. “Britt, oh for heavens sake.”

Max was still over by the entrance as he was taking a look at it. He put a hand on the opening and noticed it squeaked. “this building isn’t old, it’s fake. These stones are made of plaster”

Max and Britt looked at the inside where it was dark, the wind was different as it was blowing into the building.
“the wind is trying to pull us in.” Britt said

Angela got out of the car and walked over “What is it?” Angela asked
“Come on, let’s go in. I want to see what’s on the other side.” Max said to Angela

Britt felt strange and a bit weird about the whole thing as she looked up at her dad. “I’m not going! It gives me the creeps.”
Max looked down at her “Don’t be such a scardy cat Britt.” Max said to her then looked at Angela “Let’s just take a look.”
Angela took a look at the inside “The movers will get to our house before we do.”
“It’s alright, they’ve got the keys.” Max said but Britt wasn’t happy about the whole thing at all. “They can start without us.”
Angela cross her arms “Alright, just a quick look.” She said

Britt wasn’t happy about it “Forget it, I’m not going!” Britt said as she ran back to the car and then looked at them. “Come on you guys, let’s get out of here.”
Max made a gesture with his hand “come on hunny, it’ll be fun.”
Britt held her ground “I’m not going.” Britt said firmly but looked at the weird statue in front of the place. It really freaked her out seeing it had two heads but when she looked back at her parents she gasped as they were walking in.

“Britt, then wait in the car then.” Angela said to her as they walked in.
“But mom!!” Britt said then looked at the statue seeing how weird it looked and ran after her mom. “Wait for me!”

As they walked in Britt stayed close to her mom as they walked in. She didn’t care much for the dark of this place at all.
“Everybody watch your step.” Max said
“Britt, don’t’ cling to me, you’ll make me trip.” Angela said as they walked

The three-kept walking until they came to the other side that was lit up. There were many chairs and a door where they could go.

“What is this place?” Britt asked
Angela put a hand over her ear “huh, do you hear that?” Angela asked
The three listened as they smiled hearing the noise.
“It sounds like a train.” Britt said to her mom
“We must be near a train station.” Angela said to her

Max smiled at them “come on, let’s go check it out.” He told them as he leads the way.

As they walked toward the door, Britt looked back at the way they’d came but still kept up with her parents. She wondered what was going on and figured she would soon find out. As they walked through the door they came across a field and looking seeing houses their eyes landed on the blue house in the distance.

“What are all those buildings?” Britt asked
“I knew it, it’s an abandon theme park. They built them everywhere in the early 90’s. Then the economy went bad and they all went bankrupt. This must be one of them.” Max said to his family

Max started to walk away and Angela followed him. “Where are you going?! You said just a quick look.” Britt yelled at them. “Hey!”

Wind suddenly blew behind her towards her making her look up because it sounded like the building was moaning but not for long as she ran after her parents. Britt took her mom’s hand as she looked back.
“Did you hear that? It sounded like the building was moaning.” Britt said
“it’s just the wind.” Angela said then smiled “Oh what a beautiful place. We should have brought our lunch then we could have had a picnic.”

Angela and Britt were still following far into the forest as they seen max standing on some rocks looking around.

“looks like they were going to add a river.” Max said as he helped Angela down then he started to smell some food.
“Ugh” Angela said
“Hey you smell that?” Max asked as he looked at her. “Something smells delicious.”
Angela smelled the air “Yeah and I’m starving.” Angela said
“Maybe this theme park is still in business. Let’s go” Max said as he started walking with Angela.
“Britt, hurry it up.” Angela said as she looked back at her.
“Wait a minute!” Britt said as she was making her way through the rocks.

Following her parents, she went up some stone stairs and as they were making their way through Britt noticed they went through some sort of town. Max on the other hand was learning his way through his sense of smell.

“over there.” Max pointed

Following max, they walked behind but noticed that every building was a restaurant. It seemed strange that most of the restaurants weren’t open yet there was one that had steam coming from it.

“Ah there it is.” Max said then he ran over and seen all the steam. “Hey I found it.” He said as he waved them down.

As they made their way over there didn’t seem to be a problem with how it was going. No one was working and they were more than willing to pay the bill. Britt’s mother had started eating and tried to get her to come over and try some while Max made himself three plates full. Britt refused but as she watched her parents eat she went back out to look around then she looked at a tower, walking over to look at it. Looking around she saw a weird building nearby and walked over.

“that’s weird.” Britt said as she came close to it. “It’s a bath house.”

Britt was standing on the bridge of the bath boat, she looked over one side of the bridge seen the train that was on the ground and then she went over to the other side to look. Though when she looked back she saw a boy who had spikey tri-color hair and purple eyes staring at her, she took in what he had worn as it wasn’t the same as she was used to.

“You shouldn’t be here.” He said to her as he walked over to her. “Get out of here now!”
“what?” Britt said
“It’s almost night, leave before it gets dark.” He said

The boy looked back seeing the lights on. “they’re lighting the lamps. Go on get out of here.” He said as he grabbed her and pushed her. “You gotta get across the river, go I’ll distract them.” He said as he turned around and blew something out of his hand.

Britt ran fast as she was trying to move fast but as It was getting darker the lights were still on and she rubbed her eyes. “What’s up with him?” She said as she kept moving. She noticed the differences as she carefully made her way to her parents. “Mom, Dad!” She said as she put a hand on her dad’s shirt. “come on quit eating let’s get out of here!” Though when she saw what looked at her it wasn’t her dad but the face of a pig.

It freaked her out and for the moment she stood there until she ran and looked around. Calling for her parents she looked around, but seeing she was surrounded she ran. It seemed almost like forever until she came back near where the bricks were only she didn’t land on bricks but seen the water. She crouched down and tried to say it was all a dream but when she looked at her hands she saw she was becoming see through. Britt seen a boat land and she saw what looked like invisible people but seeing she was turning invisible she went and hid as she huddled in a corner not sure what to do. Then suddenly she felt an arm go around her.

“Don’t be afraid I just want to help you.” He said
“No. No no no.” Britt said
He took out a piece of food and put it near her “Open your mouth and eat this. You have to eat some food from this world or else you’ll disappear.” He said
“No!” She said as she tried to push him away but gasped as she looked and her arms went right through him.
“Don’t worry, it won’t turn you into a pig.” He said as he put the piece of food in her mouth. “Chew it and Swallow.”
She chewed it and swallowed as she sat there
“Good, you’re all better.” He said then put a hand out. “See for yourself.”

Reaching out slowly she put her hand out till it met with his hand. Looking in his eyes she said “I’m ok.”
He took her hand as he kept eye contact with her “You see. Now come with me.” He said as he got up.
“Where are my mom and dad?” Britt asked, “They didn’t really turn into pigs, did they?”
“you can’t see them now but you will.” He said then looked over his shoulder before kneeling getting close to her “Don’t move.”
“That bird is looking for you, we need to get moving.” He said as he got up and tried to help her up.
“Hm, my legs, I can’t stand up what will I do?” Britt asked
“Calm down. Take a deep breath” he told her and she closed her eyes doing just that.

Atem put his hand over her leg as she had her eyes closed “In the name of the wind and the water within thee, unbind her.” He said, “Get up”
As he made a move with his arm she was able to stand up which made her surprised.

Leading her around as he knew his way around the world, he made sure no one saw it but when a door was in their way he made a move toward a door and it came open. They ran for a long time going through a warm section, a cold section and through a big long row of pigs that were all in cages. Britt couldn’t do much but look back as they headed the way that he was leading her.
A Commission for :iconfairyofthunder22: 1st chapter of a short story Spirited away based plot with YGO Character(s) and some of my ocs.

YGO @ Kazuki Takahashi
Britt,Nina @ :iconqueenbrittstalin:
Spirited away  belongs to Hayao Miyazaki

So it's kinda an AU
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FairyOfThundera22's avatar
This is a great start! I love it already!