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Once there was a girl, with brown hair with purple streaks, She lived among her family as she adored them. She lived among her brother though who lived to make her miserable and when they took in an orphan girl. Her life seemed no different as they would make her miserable regardless of what she did. Even after her parents died, she was left to be under the protection of her older brother who let the adopted sister make her do whatever she wanted.
The girls name was Britt and her brother's name was Aiden. The adopted sister's name was Anzu. Britt had to do everything they wanted her do, she never was able to be clean for long since they would always have her do something dirty.
“Britt, go clean the dungen.” Aiden said
“Make sure you're on your knees while your doing it.” Anzu said with a slight laugh.
Britt frowned and walked away hanging her head down. She knew she could easily hurt them with her gifted power but she decided not even to use it on them. She let them make her miserable. She got down and started to clean the dungen, a few tears in her eyes.
Mom and dad are gone and I'm miserable..when do I get my chance at happiness? Britt thought as she was doing the work.
For a few days they made her do all the chores in the house, then she heard a knock on the door. She dusted off some of the dirt to answer the door and opened it. When she opened it she saw a messenger with a letter.
“thank you.” She said taking it then closing the door.
As she opened it she looked at it to see who it was from and what it was about. She hoped for something she could look forward to and as she opened it she saw it was from the main royal family of Egypt.
This is it. Britt thought
you're invited to the ball where every Princess is to attend. One may be lucky to be chosen by the Prince himself and rule by his side as the future Queen of Egypt.
~ Pharaoh
Britt had no choice but to take the letter to her brother, so she closed it and then walked toward the throne room. She gave it to her brother and then left quickly. She knew if she was going to have any chance there would need to be a dress.
Anzu walked in and Aiden shared the news with her. He had suspicions on what Britt was up to and so he had Anzu fallow her.
Think you'll get the chance to go little Britt. I don't think so. Anzu thought
The girls name was Britt and her brother's name was Aiden. The adopted sister's name was Anzu. Britt had to do everything they wanted her do, she never was able to be clean for long since they would always have her do something dirty.
“Britt, go clean the dungen.” Aiden said
“Make sure you're on your knees while your doing it.” Anzu said with a slight laugh.
Britt frowned and walked away hanging her head down. She knew she could easily hurt them with her gifted power but she decided not even to use it on them. She let them make her miserable. She got down and started to clean the dungen, a few tears in her eyes.
Mom and dad are gone and I'm miserable..when do I get my chance at happiness? Britt thought as she was doing the work.
For a few days they made her do all the chores in the house, then she heard a knock on the door. She dusted off some of the dirt to answer the door and opened it. When she opened it she saw a messenger with a letter.
“thank you.” She said taking it then closing the door.
As she opened it she looked at it to see who it was from and what it was about. She hoped for something she could look forward to and as she opened it she saw it was from the main royal family of Egypt.
This is it. Britt thought
you're invited to the ball where every Princess is to attend. One may be lucky to be chosen by the Prince himself and rule by his side as the future Queen of Egypt.
~ Pharaoh
Britt had no choice but to take the letter to her brother, so she closed it and then walked toward the throne room. She gave it to her brother and then left quickly. She knew if she was going to have any chance there would need to be a dress.
Anzu walked in and Aiden shared the news with her. He had suspicions on what Britt was up to and so he had Anzu fallow her.
Think you'll get the chance to go little Britt. I don't think so. Anzu thought
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It says she "lived among her family as she adored them," but then later states that "her parents died." This is kind of a contradictory statement. Since the only family we know of as of now is Britt's parents and brother, then that would mean they're the family that is adored since her parents are gone. I'm not too sure what you meant here, so I would clarify it.
Other than that, very Cinderella-y. lol.
Other than that, very Cinderella-y. lol.